Sensory language is a descriptive technique that uses details related to the five senses to create vivid imagery. By evoking the wonders of sight, hearing, smell, taste, and touch, youâll build a living, breathing world that readers canât help but get lost in.
In this post, weâll go through each type of sensory language one by one to explain why they are effective, and how you can take advantage of them in your writing. Along the way, weâll examine a few snippets of stellar sensory description from contemporary literature so you can see what it looks like in action.
Letâs start by taking a look at the type of sensory language youâre likely to encounter most often.
đď¸ Visual language draws readers in
The secret to sensational sensory writing lies in specificity. Deliberate, carefully considered word choices can transform simple descriptions into striking imagery.
This concept holds true across all types of sensory language, but weâll use sight to explore it in detail here. Seeing is believing, after all â if you can successfully convey the visual details of your world, readers will find themselves absorbed in its atmosphere in no time.Â
Start by considering color. You could describe the ocean as âblue,â but opting for a specific shade will be much more evocative:
- Shimmering cerulean brings to mind a sunny, tropical beach.
- Dark navy feels cold, stormy, maybe even dangerous.
Boom. With a simple switch in adjectives, weâve painted a more vivid picture of the setting and better established the tone. You can apply this idea to size as well â here are just a few synonyms for âbig,â each with varying implications:Â
- Grand is majestic and impressive.
- Towering is powerful and imposing.
- Bulky is awkward and cumbersome.
Next, think about lighting. An old married couple might walk hand-in-hand down an old cobbled lane under the soft, amber glow of a halogen lamp post, while a vengeful murderer walking that same road is illuminated by the pale flickering of a dying streetlight.Â
You can also play with shape to create a similar effect. If a doorway has an arched top, that often implies elegance or tradition, while a heavy, reinforced door signifies secrecy or protection. Tailoring your worldâs visual details around the story youâre trying to tell allows you to create vibrant imagery that will suck readers into your narrative.
Visual language in action: Mexican Gothic đĽ
In this scene, protagonist NoemĂ is confronted with the garish wallpaper decorating her new bedroom:
âWell, the wallpaper was not green. Not even close to green; it was a muted pink, the color of faded roses, with ugly yellow medallions running across it. Medallions or circles; when you looked at it closely you might think they were wreaths. She might have preferred the green wallpaper. This was hideous, and when she closed her eyes, the yellow circles danced behind her eyelids, flickers of color against black.â
By describing the wallpaper as âmuted pink, the color of faded roses,â author Silvia Moreno-Garcia doesnât just evoke a color, but a state of decay â the once-vibrant wall has grown dull, much like NoemĂâs enthusiasm for her new room.Â
The faded pink isnât the only thing thatâs âoffâ here. The ambiguous shape of the âugly yellow medallionsâ implies that something isnât quite right about this place. Their lingering presence behind NoemĂâs eyelids amplifies this feeling, transforming the medallions from a gaudy aesthetic choice to an invasive presence that follows NoemĂ even in her subconscious. This seemingly innocuous detail hints at the houseâs psychological influence, foreshadowing the looming supernatural horror without spelling it out.
Now that we've covered what meets the eye, let's explore what meets the ear.
đ Hearing reveals a storyâs rhythm
Auditory language is excellent at establishing your storyâs atmosphere. The distant pitter-patter of gentle rainfall will create a comforting tone, while the low rumble of distant thunder instills a sense of ominous foreboding.
Aside from volume, you should also consider the quality of different sounds, like the nails-on-glass squeal of a braking subway car, or the melodic chirp of crickets at dusk. Perhaps the noise youâre describing has a distinct pattern, like the steady tick-tick-tick of an old grandfather clock, or the irritating drip⌠drip⌠drip⌠of a leaky faucet.Â
Did you notice anything about those last two examples? They both make use of onomatopoeia â words that mimic the sound they represent. Itâs not always easy to define, but youâll usually recognize it by ear â animal sounds like moo and baa are classic examples, but the gentle rustle of leaves or the harsh clang of metal meeting metal falls into this category as well.
Auditory language in action: The City We Became đ
While wandering through the Bronx, Ms. Bronca Siwanoy pauses for a moment to soak in the sounds of New York City:
â...she has subsumed herself into the sound of the water and the chirr of the insects and the endless drone of cars making their way over the expressways and the GW in the distance. But that isnât the only sound she can hear, is it? It is beneath the others, the pillar supporting them, the metronome giving them rhythm and meaning: breathing. Purring.â
Pay close attention to the order in which Jemisin presents each sound here. She starts with the immediately recognizable, running water, before getting a little more specific with the onomatopoeic âchirrâ of insects. Note the specific use of âdroneâ to describe the cars â it doesnât just evoke the presence of traffic, but its distinct auditory quality: humming, constant, and monotonous.
Once her readers are sufficiently immersed in the cityâs sonic rhythm, Jemisin takes her auditory imagery one step further. The sounds aren't just background noise â they're alive. By describing the undercurrent as âbreathingâ and âpurring,â she transforms New York from a mere setting into a living, breathing character.
Traffic isnât the only thing that hums in the big city. Food vendors, gasoline, the sewer â urban areas are filled with all kinds of aromas, both pleasant and pungent, that you can use to great effect in your writing.
đ Smell can tell a story
Dedicated descriptions of smell may not be quite as intuitive to implement as their visual and auditory counterparts, but olfactory language is just as powerful in its own right.
Smell excels at forging an emotional connection between a character and a specific place or time period. The warm aroma of freshly baked bread might mentally transport a jaded adult back to their grandmotherâs bakery, or the smoky fragrance of a campfire might whisk a widower back to youthful days gone by with their dearly departed.Â
This emotional association makes olfactory language an especially effective tool for creating indirect characterization, as weâll see in this next example.
Olfactory language in action: The Scent Keeper đş
In this scene from the opening chapter, the protagonist Emmeline is introduced to a new smell by her father, the titular scent keeper:
âI kept my chest tight and my breath shallow. I could feel the tendrils of a fragrance tickling the inside of my nose, slipping into the curls of my black hair. I could smell campfires made from a wood I didnât recognize; dirt more parched than any I had ever known; moisture, ready to burst from clouds in a sky Iâd never seen. It smelled like waiting.â
Emmeline can identify a few familiar elements â dirt, moisture-laden clouds, campfire smoke â yet they feel strangely foreign. While her knowledge of wood and earth reveals someone well-acquainted with nature, her unfamiliarity with these particular scents suggests that there is still plenty out there that she has yet to discover.
The aromas evoke distant adventure: fires from unknown trees, parched earth from far-off arid lands. When she describes the scent as âwaiting,â we get a glimpse of her latent desire for discovery â the fragrance doesn't just evoke foreign places, but the promise of journeys yet to come.
Smell has given us a taste of what we can expect from our next sense â letâs tuck into some gustatory language.
đ Taste as an intimate detail
Much like smell, the sensation of taste can be a little tricky to weave into your writing, but it can be incredibly potent when implemented effectively.Â
In Marcel Proustâs In Search of Lost Time, the taste of a tea-soaked madeleine mentally transports the Narrator back to their childhood, when they enjoyed the same snack with their beloved aunt. This is the essence of gustatory language â itâs used to create an immediate, physical response that readers will resonate with, like Proustâs madeleine.Â
A character can catch a stray whiff of a passing scent, or hear a sound far in the distance, but it is far less common to passively taste something. As such, most taste-oriented descriptions require that a character makes an active choice to consume something, whether thatâs a bitter medicine or a gourmet meal. Of course, that makes those rare involuntary exceptions all the more visceral and distinct â think of the metallic taste of blood in the air.
Gustatory language in action: The Taste of Ginger đ§
As you might expect from the title, Mansi Shahâs The Taste of Ginger is chock-full of delightful gustatory description. Take this passage of the protagonist, Preeti, enjoying a cup of tea and a biscuit:
âI sipped the tea, basking in the warmth as it traveled from my mouth to my stomach. I broke off a piece of a khari biscuit, and the warm, salty, buttery flakes clung to my fingertips until I licked them off. There was something about the texture of khari biscuits in India that had never been replicated back home. It instantly brought me back to my early childhood in this house.â
Readers familiar with khari biscuits will immediately identify with the specific taste that Shah describes here. Of course, anyone who hasnât enjoyed khari isnât left behind, as Shahâs use of specific, easily identifiable flavors helps immerse them in Preetiâs involuntary memory.Â
Shah also uses this opportunity to introduce some subtle characterization. Like the Narrator and his madeleines, Preetiâs khari whisks her back to her early childhood. Preetiâs nostalgic satisfaction with her snack indicates that, despite her complicated relationship with her upbringing, she does have some pleasant memories of her time in India.Â
Aside from taste, Shah makes great use of another sense to paint a vivid picture of Preetiâs afternoon tea. The tactile feeling of biscuit flakes clinging to her fingertips is another important component of the sensory experience here, so letâs explore how you can use touch in your writing next.
đď¸ Touch creates feeling
As with taste, touch generally requires direct contact to create a stirring sensory response. However, unlike its gustatory cousin, tactile language is just as often active as it is passive â a character might reach out to touch something, or they can be blindsided by an unexpected sensation, be it a cowardly sucker punch or a passionate, heat-of-the-moment kiss.Â
We already touched on how a sensation may affect a character in our punch-or-passion example just now, but tactile language goes well beyond the pain vs pleasure dynamic. Temperature, texture, weight, pressure â thereâs no shortage of options when it comes to expressing the tactile in your writing. How someone approaches touch is also important: if a character is particularly contact-averse or overly touchy-feely, that can speak volumes about their psychological state.
Tactile language in action: The Invisible Life of Addie LaRue đł
Author V.E. Schwab never needs to explicitly spell out Adelineâs declining emotional state to the reader. Instead, each tactile detail adds to the growing sense of discomfort:
âShe hurries, skirts dragging, across the field to the nearest line of trees. Back home she loved the patter of rain against the walls of the house, used to lie awake and listen to the world washed clean. But here she has no bed, no shelter. She does her best to wring the water from the dress, but it is already cooling on her skin, and she huddles among the roots, shivering beneath the broken canopy.â
The opening image of âskirts draggingâ immediately highlights the weight of the waterlogged fabric against Adeline's legs. The once-soothing âpatter of rain against the wallsâ has become harsh and unpleasant as the water âcool[s] on her skin,â and the icy temperature is so severe that it leaves Adeline frozen, shivering in response.Â
You may have noticed another kind of sensory language that Schwab uses here: hurries, wringing, shivering⌠the actions that a character takes can be just as evocative as the sensations they feel.
đ Movement brings scenes to lifeÂ
While it may not be a sense in the traditional, well, sense, descriptions of movement fall under the sensory language umbrella as well.Â
Just as taste and smell overlap in writing, touch and movement can also blur together. But while tactile language focuses on specific surface-level sensations â the prick of a cactus or the warmth of a fire â kinesthetic language captures the feeling of movement itself. Think of the dizzy spin of a dance, or a runner's jolt as their foot thuds on the pavement.
A skilled writer can wield kinesthetic language to control the pace of their narrative. Slow, deliberate motions will draw a scene out and build anticipation, while fast-paced, staccato movements can create a sense of excitement and urgency. Intense action sequences, in particular, are jam-packed with captivating kinesthetic language, as in the following example.
Kinesthetic language in action: The Priory of the Orange Tree đ
In this ship-top skirmish, a mysterious woman appears and begins cutting down unwitting seafarers left and right:
âLoth wavered, his empty hands clutching at air. Three parries and a slash, and the carpenter stumbled, blood on his tunic. The woman kicked him neatly over the gunwale. Another man hurled himself at her back, but she whirled out of his grip and threw him over her shoulder. A moment later, he had followed the carpenter into the sea.â
Shannonâs rapid-fire use of kinesthetic language here creates a vivid, almost cinematic feeling of motion. Every movement flows elegantly from one to the other â we picture our protagonist, Loth, wavering following the initial confrontation, before being treated to the precise choreography of combat through active verbs like âslash,â âstumbled,â âkicked,â and âwhirled.â Â
Notice how seamlessly touch works with movement here â the absence of feeling between Lothâs empty hands, and the visceral âgripâ that our assailant momentarily found herself in. Every word choice in this sequence is specific and deliberate, and itâs what makes this fight scene such a compelling read.
There you have it â every strain of sensory language explained and exemplified. Each one can be evocative in isolation, but the most powerful passages will blend different senses together to create a truly captivating experience that doesnât just tell readers about your world, but immerses them within it.Â